High or Low?

Space exploration started many years ago. Yuri Gagarin was the first man in space in 1961.Due to the efforts of the space researchers we can now explore a whole new field of knowledge.During those years the conflict between the USA and USSR was in its crucial moment. They were fighting over the glory of reaching space, meaning who will be the first to reach space. (The)USSR won when they sent the first man into space. However, afterwards the USA was the first to send a man who landed on the moon.

There are many people thinking that space exploration is a great thing. They say that the potential benefit from it can benefit us in many ways, such as: more space to live on the moon, because the civilization is rising or even more working places places for unemployed people. Other people say that the good thing about space exploration is the knowledge. Now a days we meet a lot of people that want to know a lot about everything and the space exploration is another field to specialize in for them.

However, there are people that think the opposite . They think that space exploration has a negative effect on people. Space exploration causes a great danger to every one, even the citizens. As everyone remembers Ilan Ramon’s spaceship exploded when it entered the atmosphere. This tragedy could have ended even worse if the space ship collapsed on people’s homes. In addition, while the governments spended incredible amounts of money on space exploration, there are many homeless, poor and sick people that just want a warm dinner or a place to spend the night in. This money can be spent for better causes.

Space exploration is a colorful, promising field of knowledge. However, in my opinion, the poor people on the streets, that just want to have a warm dinner, are much more important than space exploration it self. So, everyone needs to make their own decision if it’s positive or negative.

I'm happy to say this is much better. 

Good work.

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Daphna.