Internet?

The internet was invented in the late 90's. The invention of the internet has changed our lives in several ways. Now we can share knowledge with peers all over the world. Sharing knowledge was made(ww.+gr.) much easier and faster.Now we can publish an article or a blog post, and in seconds all our friends can read it and comment on it. This phenomenon made(gr. - use the present perfect) our lives much easier and made a difference in our ways of communication.

In the past, If you wanted to talk with your peers on the other side of the globe, you needed to write a letter and send it by mail. It was a long process, and wasn’t so convenient, because sending an urgent letter wasn’t possible. Now, with the invention of the internet, sending an e-mail is just a matter of few seconds.

Despite all of the advantages, there are (a) few disadvantages. The main ones are pornography and lack of physical activity. With the fast flow of information , we can observe that pornography become much easier to access. Despite all of the parent control programs, pornography is still available 24 hours a day, to all the little kids on the planet. Another disadvantage is the lack of physical activity,because you sit infront of the computer the whole day and do not move much, which is very important (in order) to develop social skills in kids. The lack of it, causes the children, get into depressions(phr.), and have no real friends.

In conclusion, dispite  the disadvantages, that we try to minimize, the advantages overflow them. These days, we can save lives thanks to the great invention of the internet, by sending urgent messeges, such as sos. And(מיותר) saving lives is the most sacred thing in the world and nothing can compare with that.
How is the issue of saving lives relevant to what you have written in your essay? The conclusion is supposed to relate to whatever you have presented in your essay, summarize it and conlude.

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Daphna