My Best Mates

I have a lot of good friends or relatives.It was really hard to choose the most special person,the closest person to me,but finally I have chosen two friends whom I want to write about. The first one is Mike and the second is Sahar.They are both amazing friends with their personal qualities which I admire.Mike always says the right thing in the right time and can calm me down even if I am really mad and Sahar is just the funniest person I know.I just love going out with her on Fridays.

About Sahar.She has a beautiful hair which I like and shining brown eyes.She is quite fat and not so tall but we are working on it together.She is the best company if I am bored,she is always there to go out and just chat or have a small talk about anything.It is the common thing for Sahar and Mike.

Now about Mike.He is the most wonderful person because he always says the right thing and he is always there to entertain me on MSN messenger.He is tall but not like me,he has black hair and a weird combination of green and blue eyes.He is the only person that I can laugh with about everything even about us,the way we look etc...
With those perfect personalities I feel like the king of the world and they feel like it too because all the confidence that we give to each other.

I wrote about two people that are close to me but there are a few more like Dorin,Reut and many more.Those two friends will always be my best friends because their amazing qualities and amazing personalities.There is nothing to add here but the last sentence:I love them.

Very good. I enjoyed it!

Daphna.

Something About Myself

My name is Andrey I learn in high school, Im 15 years old and live in Israel, this little country near Levanon. I'm tall incomparesent to my friends or class mates, I have brown eyes and I weigh about 55 kilograms,I was born on the 28th of June.I have long smooth brown hair.I have glasses but it only shows how smart I am.

As a normal teenager I have some spare time,even if it is after the youth movement that I go to every week.I am a counselor of 4th grade. I also play D&D(Dungeons & Dragons) on my spare time.For now I work at telemarketing and Im good at this work.On holidays I like to sleep because I have no time to sleep at school time and I really think that holidays were made for family,so mostly I spend it with my lovely family because I see them rarely at night when I come home.

At school I like being with my friends or just read as a normal teenager. At school I like biology and Chemistry but I learn physics too because I have to,its quite sad,I really hate the teacher but I got used to it.
Last but not least what I want for the new year. Hard question. I guess I would like to get good grades and finish school with high grades because I know I can make it even with my busy schedule.

I like it. It's clear, to the point and quite interesting. But, please pay attention to your spelling and grammar mistakes all through your essay and capitalization!

Daphna.