Hello Dear Simi!
We haven’t met since elementary school. I miss you a lot; I really wish you were here so I could have a few minutes to talk to you. I got your e-mail address from our teacher: Edna Maksimik while visiting her at her house. So, I decided to write to you. Since elementary school a lot of things have happened to me, but I want to tell you about one time, when I was late to school and got on the wrong bus.
One day, I woke up and looked at the clock. It was 8 o’clock, when I needed to be at the bus station at 7:30. I panicked, I think you understand why. I brushed my teeth, ate some cereal and got out to the bus station with my school bag. I got to the bus station at 8:30. I was very tired and almost fell asleep.After 15 minutes my bus came and I took it. I felt tired and took a little nap on the bus. After a few minutes, I woke up to the screaming of the bus driver. He told me that it was his last station and I needed to go out. When I got out of the bus I noticed that I was in Tel-Aviv. I panicked, again. I looked at the bus and I discovered that I got on the wrong one. That day I didn’t go to school, I went home to relax a little.
I hope it it will neverhappen to me again or to anyone else. This is very scary but with it, exciting. However, it is not safe to sleep on the bus. I still miss you and hope you will answer my e-mail soon.
Hugs and kisses,
Andrew
Good work.
Daphna
1 comment:
Andrew!
I really liked your letter,
it was simple, interesting and well done.
the idea was very nice, I wish something like that would happen to me too, think about it: going to tel-aviv in stead of going to school. It's almost perfect! I could spend the whole day walking around in Shenkin street.
Anyway,it was lovely!
I couldn't see many mistakes and the writing was clear.
and one more thing:
next time when you take a bus to school make sure that's the right one,and keep your eyes open.
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