"Time And Your Car"

The universal museum for vehicles presents:

”Time and your car”

For the great opening of the museum, we invite you to the first exhibitions about vehicles

Tomorrow on Birk street, London we will open our museum for visitors. Our manager, our CEO and all other staff will meet all the V.I.P guests from 9 to 11 P.M. Afterwards the museum will be open for all guests for free!

The museum will be divided into 2 parts: past and present. After the entrance hall there will be 2 doors. The first will lead to the past and the second to the present. The “past” part will be designed by Romero Athus, a French designer with a specialty in designing an old-fashion look. The “present” part will be designed by William Bryan, a Dutch designer with a specialty in designing a modern look.

"Past"

Often people think that Nicolas-Joseph Cugnot was the first inventor of the car. This "fact" made a lot of trouble for the Historicans.

We came to show you the truth about the story. The first exhibition will include the whole past of the cars: who invented them? What was the first car? Which car was invented first? The exhibition will include the first engine by Karl Benz and even answer the question about the production line of cars. We will reveal all the deepest secrets about the production of cars. The whole exhibition is followed by interactive items such as buttons which turn on a few things or the opportunity for kids to touch the exhibition items. As you know the design will be very professional and everyone has to see it!

"Karl Benz's "Velo" model (1894)"

"Present"

The second exhibition will answer more relevant questions such as: what is the most famous company for production of cars or how much money is spent for making one car. 

The exhibition will show you all kinds of cars like befouls, steam, air and even electric cars. This will be in the first part of the exhibition. The second part will be dedicated to the millions of people who died in car accidents .This part will show statistics such as deaths per billion journeys for every kind of car or deaths per billion hours for each kind of car. This part was designed by Andrew Borsuck, our CEO. The only thing he allowed us to publish is his response to the question:”What will be in the design?” He answered:”I can promise that a lot of effort and money was spent for this cause. We purchased about a million candles and a lot of black material and I just hope it will pinch some people's hearts and they will understand the importance of this situation”.

"part of the second exhibition"

These exhibitions are free from December 11, 2008 till December 15,2008.Afterwards it will cost 20$ for an adult(18-40) and 10$ for kids(0-18) and for old people it is free.

The whole staff of the museum hopes to see you!

Bibliography:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Car

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