Thursday, February 11, 2010

Letter of Complaining!


Halohamim 13 street
Holon, Israel
December 9, 2009


Mrs. Gilat Simon

The Principal Office

Kugel High School

1 Mota Gur Street, Holon


Dear Ms. Simon,

For many years now, students from all parts of our country have been given the opportunity to explore the depths of Poland. However, this trip is not only for fun. This trip, shows the students the history and culture of the Jewish people. I write to you this letter to criticize the overwhelming price of this trip, about 6000 NIS for an 8 day long trip.

Many people think that this price is just too much, I agree with them. First, not all of the students can afford the trip, so it creats a social economic gap between students.Students that can afford the trip go and those students make their own group, that stays together after this trip.

Second, this trip is an important part of the Jewish people, nothing should prevent students from going, not even the price. So, I think that you should do something with that price. In addition, I truly believe that whoever cannot pay the price, will be less connected to the Jewish comunity.

In conclusion, I wanted to add that the price is truly too high, and almost all of the students cannot pay it. So, I think that you should do something about it. If you do not know what to do you can turn to many organizations that help with the price. Or, you can just arrange big events and all the money will be contributed to pay the price for less capeble students.I really hope you would answer this letter quickly


Yours Truly,

Celine Dion
(87)
Daphna

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